Poetry for beginners

All of us are poets. Poets from all walks of life, young and old, those who have poetry in their hearts but cannot seem to let it out just yet. This forum is for them, just so to prove that indeed, there are poets among us.

Gabriel’s first try

Oh sun, oh sun

oh beautiful sun

I want to see your beautiful shine

Oh sun, oh sun

I feel that I am your brother

the moon.

I like to stand by your side

and see you shine all day.